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12-03-2008
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Some R&B/love poetry i wrote
Can you guys tell me what do you think about it?( I know it's a bit lame...but hey it's my first one:P so don't be a hatter...) :P
I know i'm mad about you I know that i feel something that's true Every day i wake up and feel so lonely But then i remember i have you my one and only It's a bit sad tough that I can't say how much i love you Or how much my heart lights up without a clue Everytime i see your face i realise it's true I am so lucky that i have you Whitout you i feel sick and sad Maybe it's just my heart telling me it's bad That i don't tel you just what i feel That i can't come clean with all that is real But i want you to know that while i'm here Your heart is in good hands so have no fear Please tell me if it's wrong to love a girl so much That every time you see her face you just want to touch And kiss her lips time and time again with no words to say I just want to see her face and touch those hands every day Such gentil smile ..such soft touch...they make it so hard to say That i fall in love with you more and more each day |
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